House of Love
care its currency
Hospitality
its hallmark
one day
a beggar
spreads deceptive palms
we never refused
so borrowed to help
fell victim to usury
got driven to penury
the rascal lives there
we were thrown
-inevitable heartbreak
changed our path
to a once-warm home
groaning under
multiple stakes
You have a right
to demean or despise
but I’ll not let
a beggar in disguise
deflate, downsize
or capitalize
on generosity
I’m happy being mean
my shriveled heart
quivers
in fear of betrayal
being taken for a ride
no one cried
no one died
but my soul dried
Now this explains everything. ‘… but my soul dried’ . Excellent take, Reena. Our media always searches the root cause behind every terrorist. Like ‘ He was wrongly punished by a teacher, or, he was so poor…’The list is very long.
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Does anyone say ‘he was trained in a university or the youth wing of a political party’? 🙂
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What a great take on the prompt, Reena. Now we know why Scrooge was so mean and misely. Well done!
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Thank you, Dwight!
Ever wondered why Hitler was whatever he was?
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I am sure Freud would have an explanation!
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😃😃
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Reena, the way you sharply capture the emotional toll of misplaced trust and the resilience in guarding against deceit is super impactful.
~David
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Thank you, David!
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What an amazing prequel that is also a wonderful shape poem! We learn what turned him into a bitter man….
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Thank you so much, Lillian!
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I love where you went with this, Reena. Your keen observation of the break in the heart shape opened up a new perspective of the image. Brilliantly written.
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Thank you so much! It means a lot coming from you.
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You are so welcome, Reena. I enjoy your writing immensely because you think out of the box. This piece is exceptional.
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🙌❤️
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This is beautifully done, Reena! I love the imaginative take on Scrooge 💖💖
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Thanks a ton, Sanaa!
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I love what you did here Reena, a great prequel and a perfect set-up for how his story ends. The character and everything reminded me of my parents, too. My dad would always be a victim to these types of scams, sometimes multiple times a victim of the same scam, even when my mother would protest and try to explain. His answer that put it all to rest was that he can live with the beggar and the scammer lying, but he cannot live with not believing and offering help to stories of turmoil. In a way, your poem reminds me that his soul, although not flawless, had this as an immunity from becoming the shriveled soul of Scrooge.
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Respect to your Dad for being strong!
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Great take Reena. You’ve combined the prompts so well.
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Thank you so much! The break in the heart shape caught my attention first, and the rest followed 🙂
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💗💗💗
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He grew up with very bad experiences, not easy when you fell for an impostor… trust is easily shattered.
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The prequel to a negative character might as well show him in a positive light.
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Ooh! So that’s why Scrooge was mean! He was protecting his emotions from being manipulated.
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The prequel is imaginary 😊
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I know, but the immersion in your poem was brilliant
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Thanks so much! 😊
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Because poem
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DVerse challenge wanted a ‘prequel’ poem. I tried to do that.
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