splashes of colour on a barren landscape
they reek of a fluid that belongs to veins
it will nourish the growth of so-called joy
we believe that it will again find a place
they reek of a fluid that belongs to veins
pockets of happiness lost in the great stream
we believe that it will again find a place
away from heart and brain, in depth of the soul
pockets of happiness lost in the great stream
it will nourish the growth of so-called joy
away from heart and brain, in depth of the soul
splashes of colour on a barren landscape
Technically and artistically brilliant, Reena. 💚
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Thank you, Dora!
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My pleasure!
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Maybe those splashes of color is what we live for.
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Absolutely right. Thanks, Bjorn!
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Nice one
Much♡love
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Thanks, Gillena!
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Lovely poem, ma’am ❤️
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Thanks so much!
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This is beautiful and inspiring. Very good poem❤️
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Thanks so much, Angel!
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A enjoyed your pantoum with its ‘pockets of happiness’, Reena, and the ‘splashes of colour on a barren landscape’.
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Thank you so much, Kim!
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You’re welcome, Reena!
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A unique idea Reena. Lovely poem
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Thanks so much!
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Most welcome 🙏🏼
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Such an interesting pantoum, Reena! Thank you for writing to the prompt!
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Thank you so much, Merril!
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You’re very welcome, Reena!
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Tis is awesome Reena! Well done! ❤
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Thanks a ton, Carol!
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