me
-waiting
to grow up,
embrace freedom
but
I
do not
know travails
awaiting me
-life
facts
want to
make themselves
known, accepted
-Truth
slow,
losing
battles to
find new meaning
knows
I
will reach
pinnacles
after reading
maps
paths
show up
only when
I acknowledge
Truth
Excellent structure of sentiments and certainly truth about living. Great job, Reena!
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Thank you so much, Susi!
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You’re very welcome, Reena! 🙂
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Wonderful series, Reena. Very thought-provoking.
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Thank you so much!
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Reena, this is a breath of fresh air! Great lanterne series! 💜
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Thank you, Colleen!
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Wow, Reena. These are way deeper than any lanturnes have a right to be! 🙂
❤
David
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Have a right to be? 🙂 Thank you, David! But the lanturne will not thank you.
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😀 I know 😀
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Your last stanza was quite powerful! Great poem, Reena! 🙂
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Thank you, Yvette!
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I like the way this circles around. (K)
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Thank you 🙏
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a glistening lanturne sequence. That last one really hit home.
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Thanks, Jude!
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Wow, I felt this one, Reena!
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Glad it resonated with you. Thanks so much!
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Very thoughtful!
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Thank you so much!
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A profound piece, Reena! Hopefully, the truth will guide us down the right path.
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Thank you so much, Franci!
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Most welcome, Reena!
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Very profound poem.
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Thank you so much!
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You’re welcome
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