those shapes you see on horizons
changing against the setting sun
an artist tries to manipulate
my spirit refuses to go straight
changing against the setting sun
outlines shifting to accommodate
my spirit refuses to go straight
stories in pictures get redefined
outlines shifting to accommodate
thoughts moving faster than the sun
stories in pictures get redefined
You see a new me, a new find
thoughts moving faster than the sun
peace calling, but new battles within
You see a new me, a new find
I may allow him to repaint
peace calling, but new battles within
those shapes you see on horizons
I may allow him to repaint
an artist tries to manipulate
Lay Down (Candles in the Rain) – Challenge #186
Love the repetition and layout, the movement of the mood and light. Superb, Reena.
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Thank you so muc! I find the pantoum a very powerful format.
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Awesome writing!
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Thank you so much!
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My pleasure!
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Amazing poetry Reena.
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Thank you so much, Jim!
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