They had cut a cake on the same table, maybe a decade ago. Sandra had lost count of the years that passed by.
Life was more about rowing in different directions, and coming back to a central zone of conflict. There was no escape, as they had to manage a terminally ill child they loved with equal intensity. They were compelled to overcome their seemingly irreconcilable differences for his sake. Robin suffered from a rare disease, in which his bones were shrivelling rapidly. He had been immobile for a few months, before he decided to fly over the nest.
His last, feeble words still rang in their ears,
“Why don’t I have a brother or sister, Mom? Maybe it keeps both of you from falling apart.”
The choice was theirs to make.
(132 words)
Heartbreaking. Hopefully, they can remember what made them fall in love in the first place, and something else to hold them together.
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Thank you, Russel! Difficult times bring out personality aspects unknown to both b4.
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Such a sorrowful story Reena.
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I am at loss of words here… Had a lump in throat. Your portrayal made it so real Reena!
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Thanks, Anagha! Get rid of that lump and smile 🙂
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As Stephen Fry said famously, the suffering of children proves that there is no God (Paraphrasing a bit here).
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Agree.
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Tragic, heartbreaking take very well expressed! Kudos!
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Thanks!
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Incredibly tragic. I hate to see kids suffer.
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Everybody does. It is a genetic trait built to protect dependent kids. Thanks a lot!
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Such a sad story, and would they be able to go through with another child after that experience – a tough call. Well written Reena.
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Thank you, Iain! They say the best gift to a child is to love their mother. It is applicable bothways.
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I was left wondering and thinking about possible outcomes of this very poignant tale long after the story had ended.
This shows the writer is of a superlative caliber.
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Thanks :). Microfiction allows packing in of unsaid messages.
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very sobering conclusion Reena, great take on the image.
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Thanks a lot!
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There’s a lot to take in here. Nicely done with plenty more questions than answers.
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Thank you so much!
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Poor little boy — thinking of his parents. Great story, Reena!
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Thanks, Joy!
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