my reality
needs to be checked
and cross-checked
till I’m sure
it does not stem
from a misty rise
of emotions
I need a surgical knife
to cut through congealed residue
of past experience
if it destroys
my fragile joy
in living
now
I wish it was faster
I wish it was automated
-all this analysis
and business of life
‘…I wish it was faster
I wish it was automated
-all this analysis
and business of life’
Beautifully expressed, Reena. Awesome take.
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Thank you so much!
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Love this!!!!! 💙
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Happy to know that 😊
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Well written poem and life can be many things.
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True that. Thanks!
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❤️
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I enjoyed the depth and straightforwardness of your piece. Beautifully penned, Reena.
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Thank you so much, Eugi!
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You are welcome, Reena!
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Beautifully written Reena.
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Thank you so much!
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You’re most welcome 🙏🏼
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So well said. Lines with deep meaning to be understood. Marvellous the way you penned Reena.
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Thanks a ton, Tanvir!
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wow this is such a deep poem
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Thank you so much, Gabriella!
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