stung by betrayal, weak in defeat
out of the strong came something sweet
never shall I love again, said He
instead, grow less, but defiantly
No more love, nothing to lose
true art does not need a muse.
He raised his sword and challenged again.
The victory was his – come sun or rain.
But let this not be a tale of revenge
It’s a wasteland as old as Stonehenge
clouds shed tears on the secrets they read
on tools of bronze and willpower to lead
Why condemn beauty or pleasures of flesh?
Samson or Delilah – willpower did mesh
Each had a motive and a cause to defend
Stories to stitch, misplaced trust to mend
Wonderful poem Reena! ❤ Well done!
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Love these lines
“But let this not be a tale of revenge
It’s a wasteland as old as Stonehenge”
Stonehenge predates this drama and brings the age old betrayal thing into an interesting perspective. 👏
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Thank you so much, Leslie!
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How true. They each had a motive and they met their fates. A brilliant poem ma’am ❤️
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Thank you so much, Aboli!
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You’re welcome ma’am ❤️
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The poem is beautiful. Xoxo
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Thank you, Selma!
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Bravo Reena! Wonderful take. I love this
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Thanks so much, Maria!
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You’re welcome 🙂
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This response avoids the usual narrative and instead touches on the humanity of it all. Very creative take. Loved the rhyme scheme. I think you captured the exposed vulnerability of both Samson and Delilah. Victims to their own mistrust. Their own desire to actually BE. Well done, Reena.
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Thanks a lot, Nigel!
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You’re welcome. 🙏
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you have captured this so well – I love how it flows so well with the message clear 💞Suzanne
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Thank you, Suzanne!
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A beautiful take Reena. An inspiring message from the age old tale.
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Thank you so much, Sadje!
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Most welcome my friend
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wow…. beautifully expressed, Reena🤍🙏
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Thank you, Destiny!
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Love it!!
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Thanks so much!
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Denying the desire of the flesh makes the wound of desire fresh
Its cure need no meds but only to face… I like your dance with literature.
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Wow, mind blowing and spectacular ❤️ The rhyme scheme adds brilliance to this poem.
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I completely agree with David! 🙂 xx Michael
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Thanks, Michael!
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Oh, Reena, your poem resonates with a captivating blend of defiance and introspection! I love how you used the line “out of the strong came something sweet” to encapsulate the paradox of finding resilience in vulnerability!
~David
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Thank you so much, David!
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