Samson and Delilah

stung by betrayal, weak in defeat
out of the strong came something sweet
never shall I love again, said He
instead, grow less, but defiantly

No more love, nothing to lose
true art does not need a muse.
He raised his sword and challenged again.
The victory was his – come sun or rain.

But let this not be a tale of revenge
It’s a wasteland as old as Stonehenge
clouds shed tears on the secrets they read
on tools of bronze and willpower to lead

Why condemn beauty or pleasures of flesh?
Samson or Delilah – willpower did mesh
Each had a motive and a cause to defend
Stories to stitch, misplaced trust to mend


W3 Prompt #98

32 thoughts on “Samson and Delilah

  1. Love these lines

    “But let this not be a tale of revenge
    It’s a wasteland as old as Stonehenge”

    Stonehenge predates this drama and brings the age old betrayal thing into an interesting perspective. 👏

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  2. This response avoids the usual narrative and instead touches on the humanity of it all. Very creative take. Loved the rhyme scheme. I think you captured the exposed vulnerability of both Samson and Delilah. Victims to their own mistrust. Their own desire to actually BE. Well done, Reena.

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  3. Oh, Reena, your poem resonates with a captivating blend of defiance and introspection! I love how you used the line “out of the strong came something sweet” to encapsulate the paradox of finding resilience in vulnerability!

    ~David

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