The face I meet inside is not as scary as the ones etched on the gate. She has pale, alabaster skin with a wide-eyed innocent look. I wonder aloud how she lives alone in that expansive space. I expect fear in her eyes, but surprisingly, she looks okay with it. Born to the manor, perhaps, but to whom?
She makes no effort to answer my unspoken questions, but insists on walking along with me to the gate.
“Somehow, I like you”, her words are what I longed to hear, but the expression does not look so benign.
“The faces you see on the gate had once walked inside, just like you did. But I will give you a chance. Walk out before the sun sets, if you wish. Nobody goes out after that. I don’t like being alone here, and need people to guard me.”
Beautifully succinct and darkly alluring…. Well done! x
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Thank you so much, Joy!
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This story makes me want to know more. It’s as if what you’ve written is like the gate, standing slightly open, making us want to come inside and explore.
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I don’t think writing prompts allow a Part 2 😀
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🙂
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If I give you credit as the source of the idea, could I write and publish a story like this?
Scott
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There is nothing to stop you 😀 We could even turn it into a Take the Story Ahead Challenge.
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Thank you!
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A bit scary. Nice ending.
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Thanks 😀
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Very intriguing indeed!!
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Thanks ☺
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Most welcome.
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Very nice, Reena.
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Thank you, Roberta!
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Great turn in your story Reena, it is a good composition.
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Thanks, Helene!
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Intriguing story.
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Thanks!
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You’re welcome 😉
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That was a twist in the tale 🙂
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🙂
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