what happens there on lazy afternoons
she sees storms swirling in her cup of tea
war beckoned, and the soldier left with glee
a soldier’s wife counts days, then the moons
satiny comfort does not count as boon
she hears bombs explode, but no one agrees
-a broken plane just landed on the tree
she hides between notes as the singer croons
fear rules her life, as warlords play the tune
Chosen form is Analogue
Analogue is a metered invented form that is limited to 3 rhymes. Itβs source is Rena Ferguson Parks a 20th century poet and educator.
The Analogue is:
- a poem of 9 lines.
- metered, all lines are iambic pentameter.
- rhymed, rhyme scheme abbaabbcc.
Written for Tanka Tuesday Weekly Challenge – Ekphrastic
Wow! This is masterfully poignant. π
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Thank you, Aishwarya!
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You are welcome, Ma’am. π
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Well done use of such a narrow rhyme scheme! I really like it!
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Thank you so much, Luanne!
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No, that satiny comfort wouldn’t be any comfort at all. Interesting form.
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Thank you, Lisa!
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An interesting form. Thank you for sharing. I liked your imagined back story, too.
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Thank you, Merril!
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You’re welcome.
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I loved that poem, Reena! I loved the alliteration and the rhyme, especially the ending. Well done!
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Thank you, Yvette!
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It’s amazing where your thoughts took you Reena though she doesn’t seem to be a soldier’s wife! Her “satiny comfort” seems real. I like this form, never heard of it. Thanks for trying new forms so successfully, they are so inspiring.
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Thanks a ton, Balroop!
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Awesome poem, Reena. Love the form too. β€οΈ
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Thank you so much, Kavya!
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Great poem Reena, itβs a new form to me. I could almost hear it being sung by Bob Dylan in his βprotest voiceβ. πππ
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Thank you, Dr. B!
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Oh, gosh. I need to mention the timeliness of this one that coincides with the war going on right now. That’s masterfully poignant. And the whole poem, so lovely. Thanks for sharing.
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Thank you so much, Selma!
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Nice form that covers a lot of turf.
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Thank you, Lisa!
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You’re welcome, Reena
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Absolutely wonderful you have caught this lady’s thoughts π
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Thank you so much, Willow!
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I really liked your poem π
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This is an amazing poem, Reena. I especially like how you use the rhyme scheme (as in the sound of marching soldiers) to speak of the horrors of war. But this last stanza… “she hides between notes as the singer croons
fear rules her life, as warlords play the tune…” really says it all. We’re also at the one year anniversary of the war between Russia and Ukraine. Excellent poem. ππ»
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Thanks a ton!
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Excellent poem, Reena. π
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Beautiful Reena and so timelyon this week’s anniversary of the beginning of the war in Ukraine. I love the switch at the end from her listening to music as escape to even the music being controlled by the aggressor. β€οΈ
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Thank you so much!
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Love this one Reena.
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Thank you so much!
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Youβre most welcome
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In awe of this poem! π
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