do you flee the scene
when things come apart; you miss
new doors opening
do you recoil from
death? life waiting outside goes
back disappointed
feet held steadfastly
to the ground cannot perceive
wings waiting to sprout
fear protects; disarms
potential; distrust bounces
saviors at the gate
learn to recognize
catalysts; they might take you
where you want to go
Absolutely excellent, Reena. Just – wow.
~David
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🙏🙏
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A beautiful chain of senryu Reena 💜
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Thank you, Willow!
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A pleasure 💜
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This really makes you think!
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So glad to hear that. Thanks a ton!
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These are fantastic, Reena!
Yvette M Calleiro 🙂
http://yvettemcalleiro.blogspot.com
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Thank you, Yvette!
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Reblogged this on https:/BOOKS.ESLARN-NET.DE.
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Superb senryu series. Your ability to flow from one stanza to the next is amazing.
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It means a lot. Thanks a ton!
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You’re welcome, Reena!
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Stellar senryu series, Reena. Wise words.
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Thank you so much, Lisa!
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You’re very welcome.
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Seems Interesting!
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Reena, these senryu are fabulous. The first one is so captivating.
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Thank you so much!
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Thought provoking….
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Thank you so much!
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