she scoops her insides
survives dreamy rides
on golden sands, oceans blue
authenticity
bold vivacity
banishes clouds, skies are blue
I see her flash smiles
stretching empty miles
Let me see your soul, I say
silence engulfs winds
songs unheard-she sings
from other dark worlds she slays
it’s chilly out there
snowy paths nightmare
what will warm you up, she asks
find your soul, let burn
let energy churn
bask in the light, shed those masks
Chosen form – Alouette
The Alouette, created by Jan Turner,
consists of two or more stanzas of 6 lines each, (12 lines or more)
with the following set rules:
Syllabic: 5/5/7/5/5/7
Rhyme Scheme: aabccb
Reena, I love your creativity and how you crafted this Alouette poem by weaving the blue color into the poem. It’s excellent! The middle stanza really speaks to me! š
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Thank you, Colleen!
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You’re so welcome.
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That was fantastic, Selma! I love the story within the poem.
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Thank you, Yvette!
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I like her adventurous spirit.
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Fictional characters set examples at times.
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Loved your take, inspired to try this form. š
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Don’t think š Try it out.
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Haha, sure. š
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