Let it go wherever it wants to go
Those who believe see roses in the snow
You never know what joys are trapped under ice
You need to dig life to find all things nice
Discover warmth underneath, when it’s cold
I’s like to die without growing old
You’re not down because of cold weather blues
It’s negativity that you’ve let loose
Perk up, perk up, light a bonfire on Christmas
Watch Santa come with gifts of joy and success
Let it go wherever it wants to go
Those who believe see roses in the snow
Beautiful.
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I appreciate your generosity.
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nahi beta, aap likhte hi itna achchha ho prashansha kiye bina raha nahi jaata.
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🙏🙏
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Reena I like how you used enjambment on the lyric starting “when it’s cold…”
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Thank you, Lisa!
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You’re welcome.
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If I could I would be happy to see those roses.
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Digital enhancement 😀😀
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This is absolutely lovely! 💘💘💘
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Thank you so much, Sanaa!
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Yes, let the negativity go, and enjoy the snow!
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Think about us, who travel to see snow, and have never experienced it where we live ☺️
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Let it go wherever it wants to go
Those who believe see roses in the snow
These lines sound like beautiful refrain of a song.
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It is meant to be that. The final piece is closer to the ghazal format.
Thank you, Punam!
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Honestly, I think we have to chose to love winter – we actually moved from the south – the day we bought our house it was below zero and windy! Nicely penned and thought out.
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Thank you, Margaret!
There is no winter where I live ☺️ A poet’s imagination or prior experience works.
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LOVE the optimism here….and this line “Those who believe see roses in the snow” just glows.
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Thank you so much, Lillian!
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Beautiful
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Thank you!
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Reblogged this on NEW BLOG HERE >> https:/BOOKS.ESLARN-NET.DE.
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Wonderful 🌹❄️
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Thanks!
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*applause!* well written, Reena!
❤
David
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Thanks, David! 🙂
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This is a beautiful poem Reena
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Thank you, Sadje!
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