evenings amplify
fragrance permeating air
see night jasmine bloom
evenings amplify
perfect execution of
daytime thoughts and deeds
fragrance permeating air
pulls you to the source – is it
a weed or blessing
see night jasmine bloom
darkness cannot obstruct moons
writers spin stories
Troiku written for Tanka Tuesday Poetry Challenge – Specific Form
Reena Saxena 
This is so atmospheric and beautiful, Reena ❤
~David
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Thank you, David!
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Beautiful! 🍁
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Thanks!
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Reena, I always look forward to your takes on the prompts. I like the combination of sensory images with reflections using the moon to link them.
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Thanks a ton! I’m honored that you look forward to my takes.
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My pleasure, Reena.
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Beautiful.
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Thanks!
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I especially like that final verse. (K)
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Thank you so much!
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gorgeous.
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Thanks a ton!
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A pleasure.
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Beautiful. I love it’s fragrance
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Likewise. It’s called Raat ki Rani here. Thanks!
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I know and I love it’s fragrance.
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🙂
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Reblogged this on Frank J. Tassone and commented:
#Haiku Happenings #1 (10/11/22): Reena Saxena’s latest #troiku for Colleen Chesebro’s Tanka Tuesday Poetry Challenge!
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This is fabulous, Reena and I love the way you set it up to look like the horses pulling the troika sleigh! 💜
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Thanks for a deep insight, Colleen!
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You’re welcome. Well deserved, Reena. This looks fabulous!
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