you leave me dumbfounded
yes manning all the way
years pass, I’m grounded
youth to greys, decades float away
or have I lost my head as they say
overreact to perceived sophistry
oxygenate ethics, revive the play
obstructing me – your chicanery
realms of stories fall apart
react to untruths, I sure do
rumors abound, paint me dark
reconcile with lies, I won’t do
Written for Saturday Mix – Lucky Dip
Reblogged this on Sharing Thoughts and commented:
‘realms of stories fall apart
react to untruths, I sure do
rumors abound, paint me dark
reconcile with lies, I won’t do’
-Reena Suxena
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Powerful. Excellent take. What a tough (not for you) form of poetry.
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Thanks! The form of poetry is not tough. It’s the complex expression of inescapable battles that torment us.
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So true.
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A unique form. Your verse compliments the image.
Having to use those 2nd letters of verses created challenges.
I like what you did. I ended up with hard letters too (well I thought so, but I made them work.) 😀
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Your site shows as private. Have sent a request for access.
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My icon doesn’t go to my open site – you have to go to the link from MMLM or Here
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