idle dreams
under a Tuscan sunset
-wasting life in
boat parties
-floating aimlessly on
choppy waters
in Krakow nights
-planning a trip
to Sunny Paris
rich brats escape
a vanilla existence
-unaware of sea salt
in tears
-what mulling spices
lend to intoxication
grounded mustard seeds
crackling sesame seeds
roasted to enhance flavour
of a meal they know not how to cook
of a life they know not how to lead
of a worth they will never earn
and face the wrath of hollowness
in sunset years
consumed by the fuel
that actioned idle days
and lit up dark nights
Written for dVerse Poetics – Spicing it Up
So true. Excellent.
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Wow! Some do have the clueless lazy life. That’s true.
Much💛love
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Thank you, Gillena!
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Spoiled, entitled … you took those unattractive traits and created an attractive poem!
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Thank you, Helen!
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This delivered a strong impact Reena, and told a story all too true.
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Thank you, Rob!
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What a great capture of a life with no purpose! Excellent thoughts.
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Thank you, Colleen!
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You’re welcome.
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I love those first two stanzas – you really know who these characters are.
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Thank you!
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This is so poignant! I resonate with; “rich brats escape/a vanilla existence/unaware of sea salt in tears.” 💜💜
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Thank you, Sanaa!
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You captured those empty lives so well here, Reena–the things they consume without reflecting on how they’re made or at what cost.
Thank you for joining in on the prompt!
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Thank you, Merril!
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You’re welcome!
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