The chosen format is Bagarthach

The Bagarthach is:
• funny or clever but mean spirited.
• short, one quatrain.
• syllabic 8-9-8-9 syllables per line, sometimes all lines are 8 syllables.
• rhymed abab.

dark squares disorient, words lost
un-connected in virtual space
am I addressing rooms with ghosts
turn off avatars, show me a face

Written for Tanka Tuesday Weekly Challenge


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