To believe, or: Heaven leans on earth

Enjoy the Cleave Poem, done with two Shadormas — by David

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A Cleave poem

in the form of two Shadormas

as I agerhythms shift
over endful dayswhetting my senses
transformed bya wisdom
existingbeyond me
in the perceived universecalling unrelentingly
I’ve come to believeheaven leans on earth


How to read a cleave poem?

Simply:

  1. Read the left hand poem as a first discrete poem.
  2. Read the right hand poem as a second discrete poem.
  3. Read the whole as a third integrated poem.


Shadorma

  • The Shadorma is a Spanish poetic form made up of a stanza of six lineswith no set rhyme scheme (rhyme is optional);
  • It is a syllabic poem with a meter of 3/5/3/3/7/5;
  • It can have many stanzas, as long as each follows the meter.


#TankaTuesday

The above was written for Colleen M. Chesebro’s ‘Tanka Tuesday’ prompt.

Poets were encouraged to write syllabic poems on the theme of “lessons from nature”.


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