watch the orange orb go down reluctantly
as if it is still thirsty
to swallow the sky
darkening skies terrorize me with secrets
not knowing what to expect
I shut eyes to sleep
hope I don’t dream of glistening silver swords
drop like comets in the night
to tear me apart
it has been the longest day ever – waiting
-warriors on a mission
tiptoe in darkness
Will they find me before I plead innocence?
I wrote dark, macabre stuff
to sell untruth, but
stories refuse to let go of me or sleep
I will die a martyr’s death
reinvent graveyards
The chosen format is Caccia for Tanka Tuesday Weekly Challenge #Themeprompt
The elements of the Caccia or Catch are:
- known to have been composed with random 11, 7 and 5 syllable lines.
- usually carries a refrain at the end of the stanza.
- composed favoring onomatopoeia, incomplete phrases and the exclamatory statement.
- lyrics framed by stanza and rhyme at the discretion of the poet.
Source: poetscollective.org
And that is how the macabre is born! 🙂
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True. Thanks, Susi!
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You’re welcome, Reena! 🙂
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Reena, you’ve created a story with a strong warning. Well done!
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Thank you, Gwen!
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I do enjoy good chills. Your caccia is delightful and intriguing.
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Thanks so much!
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I love your last line, Reena! What a great poem! 🙂
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Thank you, Yvette!
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I love this, very chilling!
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Thank you so much!
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I love your vision of the longest day, Reena. It’s a chilling reminder to always tell the truth! Love this!!
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Thank you, Colleen!
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Always a pleasure. You excell at this unusual forms. 💜
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Compliment is much appreciated ☺️
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Well, it’s well deserved!
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This is quite dark – but so well expressed!
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Thank you so much, Margaret!
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Haunting and intriguing! I loved reading this one.
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Thanks for stopping by ☺️
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Reena, this is fantastic! Love, love, love it 💕🙂
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Thank you so much! ☺️🙏
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Hello
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This is just brilliant very chilling 🌹🌹
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Thanks, Willow!
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