golden yellow orb
inspires awe
unfailingly
unquestioningly
Always, always
What leaves me spellbound
is the level of comfort
in moving out of sight
gently, graciously
giving in to night
No ego battles here
No desire to win
I know what I am
Always, always…
Lovely, Reena.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you, Punam!
LikeLike
No ego battles here. Shine when its your turn.
LikeLiked by 1 person
You put it quite well 🙂 Thanks!
LikeLike
Beautiful thoughts.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thanks!
LikeLike
The repeated phrase anchors this poem so beautifully.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you, Xan!
LikeLiked by 1 person
The sun as role model, I love it.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you, Lisa!
LikeLiked by 1 person
You’re welcome Reena.
LikeLiked by 1 person
This is such a thoughtful, moving and beautiful poem! Thank you so much for writing to the prompt ❤️❤️
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you, Sanaa!
LikeLike
Beautiful poem
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thanks, Diana!
LikeLike
Reena, this is stunning. I love the repetition of the words, “always, always.” It adds something magic to the poem, spoken like a “spell.”
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you, Colleen!
LikeLiked by 1 person
You’re so welcome. ❤️
LikeLiked by 1 person
Beautiful! Thanks for sharing, and enjoy a nice day! xx Michael
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thanks, Michael!
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you as well for the very interesting challenges and great thoughts, Reena! xx Michael
LikeLiked by 1 person
Reblogged this on NEW BLOG HERE >> https:/BOOKS.ESLARN-NET.DE.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Lovely poem…💕
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thanks 🙂
LikeLiked by 1 person
When you are in complete control there is not competition… so it is with the sun! Well done Reena.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you, Dwight!
LikeLiked by 1 person
You are welcome!
LikeLiked by 1 person
aw
caw be they raven or crow
no tool a fule
for the jay
and the white and black
of their foe the name i no longer know
LikeLiked by 1 person
What a beautiful poem
LikeLiked by 1 person
Glad you liked it.
LikeLiked by 1 person
👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼
LikeLiked by 1 person