it’s pure, it’s a call of the soul
a wish to see myself as whole
I scan depths of oceans and climb dizzy heights
I walk through forests brown and green
splashed with yellows and carotene
I see all shades of rainbows, but yet no white
chosen invisibility
intrigues my sensibilities
it colors skies with vibrant rainbows, but hides
black emerges in the background
collective shades going around
purity being defied, yet emphasized
The chosen format is Black Narcissus Tercet Rima for Tanka Tuesday Poetry Challenge
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Reena, this is fabulous. I’ve often mused on the “white” sky myself. What a brilliant observation saying white is invisible. Excellent! You excell at color poetry, my friend. ❤
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Thank you, Colleen!
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You’re so welcome. ❤
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Perfect as always Reena 💜
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Thank you so much, Willow 🙂 for the emphasis ‘as always’.
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You always deliver thank you 💜
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Thought-provoking, indeed! I love the imagery.
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Thank you so much!
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Most welcome!
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A lot to think about. Very interesting.
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Thank you, Patricia!
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A very interesting imagery, i will need a longer time to analyse. Thanks for sharing! xx Michael
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Take your time 😀😀
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Reblogged this on NEW BLOG HERE >> https:/BOOKS.ESLARN-NET.DE.
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I love your imagery. 💗
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Thank you, Gwen!
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I found this very thought-provoking, Reena.
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Happy to know that, Jude!
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I loved it, Reena! 🙂
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Thanks, Yvette!
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opt popped
poppa daddy
dont like him either
gosh!
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So evocative. Wonderful imagery. Just beautiful, Reena 💕🙂
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Thank you so much, Harmony!
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So beautiful Reena
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Thank you, Sadje!
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You’re welcome
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