The chamber is dark, but she can sense blood trickling towards the door.
Her entire life is being streamed live by some unknown source … and yes, she discovers truths she had missed, or rather chosen to deny.
She wants to make accusations, seek explanations or correct certain perspectives, including her own. But the grip on her soul is tightening, though her fingers are drained of energy.
At the edge of life, it dawns on Elaine that only consciousness ends, not existence.
Daylight starts peeking in through the window, to find Elaine in a different form at a different level.
Written for Six Sentence Stories

Oh, I like the heaviness of it! a good six!
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Thank you so much!
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Wow, heavy writing on this six!
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Thank you, Liz!
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Deep story, Reena.
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Thank you, Jenne!
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Most intriguing.
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Thank you, Mimi!
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Consciousness might end but that’s alright, everything you ever posted will live forever. Sweet dreams. 🙂
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Thank you so much!
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But…but!!! continuity of consciousness without that we’re not just on a wheel, we become the wheel.
Once again, a thought-provoking Six (one of the best kind!)
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Wow! I’d like to use this somewhere – the difference between being a wheel and on a wheel.
Thanks a ton!
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I wanna know more!
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Not in Six Sentence Stories 😀
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Nice combination of the blood trickling and “Her entire life is being streamed live”.
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Thank you, Frank!
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What lies on the other side? A great speculation, Reena!
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Thank you, Chris!
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Consciousness ends, not existence.
Makes me wonder what is left…
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Soul energy ☺️
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I like this Reena… a new beginning! 🙂
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Thank you, Tom!
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Very interesting story
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Thank you so much!
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Most welcome
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