black lines
circumventing
dreams in color, now flow
unevenly down rosy cheeks
-Sorrow
alters boundaries of vision
a dark line moves where hope
painted pictures
on life
Sorrow
black lines
circumventing
dreams in color, now flow
unevenly down rosy cheeks
-Sorrow
alters boundaries of vision
a dark line moves where hope
painted pictures
on life
Reena Saxena 
Captured sorrow so well, Reena!
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Thank you, Susi!
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You’re welcome!
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Evocative poem.🤍
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Thanks so much, Jude!
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Touched my heart.
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Thank you, Usha!
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tears taper and narrow
flit and descend
like a tiny sparrow
not today
rain and grey
in every sense and way
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Well said.
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Thank you, Patricia!
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Reblogged this on NEW BLOG HERE >> https:/BOOKS.ESLARN-NET.DE.
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Oh this is so moving Reena. Very well expressed the feelings of sorrow. Thanks for joining in
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Thanks for the thought provoking prompts!
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My pleasure, always
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Those final three lines are particularly poignant, Reena.
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Glad you like it. Thank you, Chris!
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