intertwined are all that stand in opposition to one another seeking relevance from what is real, but you dislike it's not a shadow you want to see it reduced, insignificant -it obstructs your chosen path yet gives you a direction acknowledge those in the orbits what's not yours it shapes your destiny, and you return favors with fervor
We can always learn from what we are not. (K)
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Fully agree.
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Love this! The last stanza says so much. Our destiny is shaped by others in addition to being shaped by ourselves. We should acknowledge what we learn and do unto others.
acknowledge
those in the orbits
what’s not yours
it shapes your
destiny, and you
return favors with fervor
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Thank you so much!
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mesh
why guess
life a test
cos some are so quiet!
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A fabulous poem, Reena. Acknowledgment of each other is always useful. ❤
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Thank you, Colleen!
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“intertwined are all
that stand in opposition” … I absolutely adore these opening lines! Lovely poem, Reena 💕🙂
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Thank you so much!
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Great poem, Reena! 🙂
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Thank you, Yvette!
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