Touch them lovingly, be as gentle as you can
Each figurine comes from my favorite woman
She is a magician, an artist at heart
She pulls joy from a hat, no sleeves to conceal
Each figurine comes from my favorite woman
She's a miracle, magicians embarrassed
She pulls joy from a hat, no sleeves to conceal
They are all pretty, none prettier than her
She's a miracle, magicians embarrassed
Touch them lovingly, be as gentle as you can
They are all pretty, none prettier than her
She is a magician, an artist at heart
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The format of your poem reminds me of some of Picasso’s paintings, where there are multiple points of view of a scene or a figure.
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The format is a Pantoum. It has structured repetition inbuilt. You are right that the same line placed in a different stanza in a different order changes the perspective.
Thank you, Penny!
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Beautiful !
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Thank you, Laurie!
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Lovely poem Reena
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Thank you, Vartika!
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I do like this poetic form. Emphasis is important, gained by repetition.
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It is a Pantoum. Thanks, Linda!
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In my school years I failed miserably to understand poetry, however I right enjoyed your poem this week,
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Thanks so much!
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I enjoyed this and was drawn into the joy of the figurines.
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Thank you, James!
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Simply beautiful.
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Thanks so much!
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Another wonderfully crafted poem. Well done, again, Reena.
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Thanks a ton, Bill!
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Beautifully expressive words … lovely.
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Thank you, Isadora!
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Such a beautiful tribute poem and the repeats are flawless.
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Thank you so much, Lisa!
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You’re very welcome.
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What a beautiful poem Reena
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Thank you, Sadje!
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You’re welcome 😇
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