The form used is Kimo – Israeli version of Haiku with 10,7,6 syllables
dipping in the blues shows different worlds,
fear in their eyes – my sharpness
mirrors insanity
witnessing the power of unknown depths
unfathomable – their own
reflections drive judgment
submarines constructed to explore what
lies below vision limits
disturb my peace – again
Interesting form and lovely poems Reena. π
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Thank you so much, Marje!
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Pleasure. β€
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Thanks for introducing us to this form, Reena! Your poem is lovely. π
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Thank you, Yvette!
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A delightful poetry form, Reena, and a beautiful poem.
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Thank you, Franci!
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My pleasure, Reena!
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This is beautiful, Reena. I love the Israel haiku.
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Thank you!
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The Israeli haiku is beautiful, Reena. β€
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Thank you, Colleen!
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You’re always welcome, Reena. β€
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Beautiful, Reena ππ
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Thank you so much!
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