How many hours more would it be, till the inevitable happened? He stares at the walls surrounding him, and helplessness stares back at him. The engraved scripts appear to shed tears, as words get blurred with the saltiness of truth.
He tracks time on international clocks, with a faint hope that he will find a way to break open the door and escape, before…
….Law takes its own course.
innocence inscribed on thick walls that bleed stories darkness of the soul struggles to see light - just once to let them know he once lived
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My mind went to every innocent prisoner of the world.
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Thank you! I guess I hit the right spot with that.
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That was so powerful, Selma! Well done! 🙂
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Thank you, Yvette!
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This is exquisitely drawn! ❤️❤️
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Thank you, Sanaa!
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Beautiful imagery, and so poignant!
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Thank you so much, Merril!
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You’re very welcome, Reena!
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You can really feel both the tension and yearning. (K)
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Thank you!
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Amazing piece Reena.
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Thanks a ton!
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Amazing poetry Reena.
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Thank you so much!
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Great imagery, Reena. I love your tanka — powerful! 💗
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Thank you, Gwen!
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I love where you went with this, Reena! Your creativity shines and the second line is stunning
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Thanks a ton!
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This is a story in itself, love it 💜
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Thanks, Willow!
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Always a delight to read your words 💜
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🙏🙏
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Reena, your imagination is on fire! I love the same line as everyone else, but I especially liked you told a story about your character. Bravo! 👏🏻 🌹
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Thank you, Colleen!
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You’re so welcome. ❤
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Wonderful, Reena. I loved where you went with this.
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Thank you so much!
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“Thick walls that bleed stories” … love that line! Wonderful imagery, Reena 💕🙂
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Thank you so much!
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that is such powerful imagery, Reena!
❤
David
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Thank you, David!
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