breaking open -misinterpreted as getting even with walls -or a breakthrough in realms of thought the narrator desperate to become a character changes the storyline -A battle in the mind declared, but never fought The audience shows audacity rewrites in bold colours to fill up gaps -stories never told lessons never taught Shared with Open Link Night at dverse
Reena Saxena 
Last two lines…..much depth there. Much meaning included within those few words!
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Thank you, Lillian!
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Breakthrough is not about doing what we want but doing what’s expected isn’t it… so maybe breakthrough is more confining ourselves to complacency,
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You have a point there.
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Ohh that last stanza tugs directly at my heart .. profound write 💝💝
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Thank you, Sanaa!
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Reena, I like the moral in your fable poem. Those filters we all have work against us many times.
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Thank you, Lisa!
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You’re welcome.
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Interesting and thought-provoking write, Reena!
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Thank you, Ingrid!
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‘Lessons never taught’ … sums it all up, sums up much of what is wrong in this world…
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Thank you, Ain!
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inside self
shit upon the shelf
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Beautiful thought provoking again. Thanks for sharing! Enjoy your day! xx Michael
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Thanks again, Michael!
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