you dig, you dream you wish, you want you work, you slog you aspire, you conspire you overstretch yourself to fulfil a dream it gets magnified it looks within reach I need to get there and when you get a chance you jump at it blind It’s victory supreme you float for a while then check where you are the oars feel heavy energy depletes Are you heading north or are stuck midstream? it feels unreal now been taken for a ride used for a while then thrown aside Is it everyone’s story or a case extreme? You start connecting With fellow travellers Hear their stories Find commonalities Whatever starts has to end Life is a journey Life is a dream…
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Dancing Queen by ABBA
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and when you get a chance
The constant climbing in the human pyramid… you actually have to stand on the shoulders of other
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Agree. Thank you, Bjorn!
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born dying
no need ask whying’
life bio
natal to fatal
swimming slipstream
with wheels bz spinnin you all~!
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Very nicely done Reena! Whatever starts has to end… a great line… simple yet profound!
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Thanks so much, Dwight!
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Love the imagery of the oars here. I read this a second time, aloud. It has a rhythm to it that fits so well with the sense of the poem.
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Thank you so much, Lillian!
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Indeed it is, and we should never give up dreaming!
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Beautiful. ‘ Whatever starts have to end…
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Thank you so much!
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Life is a constant struggle.
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Painfully so ….
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With oasis of happiness here and there.
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We wouldn’t survive without that.
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Absolutely right
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Words that carry weight…and are too close to reality for comfort! Very nice rhythm to this poem, that causes pause for thought.
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Thanks so much, Ain!
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Reblogged this on Sharing Thoughts.
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Thank you!
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