It’s not ready to welcome happiness overloaded with junk relics of an irrelevant past ghosting in unseen corners tiles at the base of cupboards move they held grandma’s wealth once I dare not touch it now for fear of snakes and scorpions popping out from shady history I discard the past done and dusted give it to a junk dealer don’t ask for a price to make space for the new The only way to live here Renovate, Repaint in colors all my own let the house smile to welcome life
Poetics: Outside Looking In
I like the feeling of feeling of slight hesitation in taking over a house full of memories, and how the poem moves to that lesson we all have to learn, a house is not a home by mere occupation, but we have to put our own colours in it. Sweet and heartwarming poem!
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Thank you so much!
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I like the practicality of this piece. We often think a house is a home forever. Once maybe, these days not so often.
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A house carries an identity stamp of the owner.
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As I read this, I get a feeling of ambivalence. The writer is fearful and averse to memories the house held; yet at the same time she wants to stay there. There has to be some level of comfort and happy memories that she wants to retain. I hope she finds contentment in this place. Very complex and beautiful poem, Reena.
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Thank you, Lisa!
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You’re welcome.
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Bring a treasure back to life ~~~ I love this!
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Thank you, Helen!
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Awesome piece, Reena! A house takes on the personality of the dweller.
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Thank you, Franci!
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Most welcome, Reena!
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Looks like you’ve got a big project going, Reena!
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A fictional one 😂😂
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We bring life to a home, or death to a house. Wonderful poem.
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It depends on personal equations. Thank you, Mary!
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What an awesome piece! Very poignant
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🙏🙏
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Yes, a house is not always a home. Loved this poem Reena ☺️💕
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Thank you, Christine!
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There is truth in what you wrote. It takes work and love to make a house your home. Fine to remember the past but not to relive it.
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Agree. Thank you, Patricia!
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Somewhere a heart is happy to see it brought back to life again, to know laughter and life will fill its rooms once more!
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Thank you, Beverly!
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So hard, sometimes, to make other’s your own. Not impossible, but…
Fine work, Reena.
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A house has a personality. It becomes as intricate as that. Thanks, Ron!
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Thanks 🙏🙏
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Very beautifully penned!
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Gratitude!
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Utterly charming poem – a pleasure to read right from those wonderful opening lines
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Thank you so much, Laura!
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A house is what we make of it… yes! Beautifully done 💝💝
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Thank you, Sanaa!
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Wonderful view of rebirth and revitalization.
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Thank you, Philip!
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