measured steps falter calculations go awry as I encounter concealed curves, veering me off beaten paths - breathing freshness
Poetics: The Poet as Painter
A New Life
measured steps falter calculations go awry as I encounter concealed curves, veering me off beaten paths - breathing freshness
Poetics: The Poet as Painter
Reena Saxena 
it seems you appreciate unexpected opportunities. That is a great way to respond to the challenge.
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Thank you, Sean!
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I like how you veered off to a new life: breathing freshness!
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Thank you, Grace!
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Often a good thing to leave the beaten path and take a breath of new fresh air.
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One should do it deliberately at short intervals. We are programmed by parents, teachers, bosses so that we unquestioningly deliver on certain parameters. Growing up is breaking moulds, or at the least enter larger ones with more breathing space.
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Those curves in the square is really a lot like life.
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Hats off to the artist for creating an illusion so perfect!
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Your poem fit perfectly to the image.
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Thank you, Mary!
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I like this personal take on how you relate to the artwork
p.s. one small point but the prompt’s request was also that you entitled the poem the same as the artwork
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I’ll correct it. Thanks for pointing it out.
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Love your perspective on this abstract art … dizzying to put it mildly!
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Oh, yeah! Some patterns and some words do have that effect. Thank you, Helen!
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