I see life like never before oxygen makes it presence felt always having remained intangible zig-zag lines on monitors pointers to heartbeats which stayed out of way being less than 20 decibels on the fringes awareness hits I worshipped loudness, ignored the gullible I feel ready to die to live again like never before rejuvenated at the core
Intriguing, yes–well said, Reena!
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Thank you, Zelda!
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You’re always welcome 🙂
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Hi reena , arthritis flaring, typing excruciating, but good work!
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Thanks for appreciating!
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A tumultuous beginning and a hopeful ending.
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Thank you, Beverly!
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Reena, I like your articulation of how something silent and invisible becomes tangible — and appreciated!
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Thank you, Lisa! When we hurt a knee and it aches on the staircase, we suddenly become aware of its existence.
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You’re welcome.
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pure air
would be fire
everywheres
but life
is short
so be a sport
and prey continue~
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Intriguing poem, Reena.
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Thanks a lot!
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Most welcome.
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