The road trip was taken against her wish.
A sense of foreboding descended on her, as they drove on the same zig-zag roads climbing up the mountains, but she controlled herself. Teenage children don’t listen anyway.
The familiar refrain of a song brought her out of her reverie.
“OMG! This is not possible. It’s the same song.”
“You enjoy old songs, Mom…”
“This radio channel closed down long back.”
The same figure in black stood on the roadside with an infant in her arms. She had stopped them a decade ago.
She’d died fifteen years ago. Now why?
Definitely eerie. I agree; write part two!
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Should do it soon 🙂
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Oooh! You can’t stop there!
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I’m seriously planning a Part 2 to this 🙂
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Yes, please!
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Nice and spooky, Reena. I loved it!
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Thank you, Colleen!
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What a chilling piece of flash fiction. Sometimes, music can bring back the worse kind of memories that seem to come back to life.
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I guess music affects the neurology. Thank you, Hugh!
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are we there?
why care
see the sights
if you can and might do!
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I would love to read more about this chilling incident, Reena!
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Calling for Part 2? 😃😃
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Yes please!
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☺️
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Oh wow! Chilling
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Thank you, Sadje!
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You’re welcome my friend
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That gave gave me chils, Reena! I like how you rooted the incident to the song on the radio.
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Thank you, Charli!
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