once again sky above darkens night falls once again the sun rises hope dawns once again life moves on cycles of breath once again I accept life myriad colors but just once finality strikes end of life..
Once again…
Reena Saxena
Experiments in Creative Writing, and more ….
Reena, I love what you did with your haiku sequence featuring life from start to finish! ❤
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Thank you, Colleen!
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You’re welcome. ❤
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Wow, what an experience to read this poem from beginning to end. The ending is very thought-provoking as well, and I also like the repetition in this piece. Well done!
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Thank you, Lucy!
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I say our choices make our life. Thanks for sharing.
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Thank you, Grace!
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You’ve incarnated a philosophy and experience of life in this exquisite sequence! Brava!
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Thank you, Frank!
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Very great sequence Reena. We do live on the edge all the time. No promise for a secure tomorrow. Live one day at a time!
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Thank you, Dwight!
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Very nice. Loved it.
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Thank you so much!
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This is just absolutely beautiful. But that last line. So true. But we are not prepared for it. I love this Reena.
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Thank you so much, Lorraine!
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There is the reality of it all in that end verse
Much✏love
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Thank you, Gillena!
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