once again sky above darkens night falls once again the sun rises hope dawns once again life moves on cycles of breath once again I accept life myriad colors but just once finality strikes end of life..
Once again…
once again sky above darkens night falls once again the sun rises hope dawns once again life moves on cycles of breath once again I accept life myriad colors but just once finality strikes end of life..
Reena, I love what you did with your haiku sequence featuring life from start to finish! ❤
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Thank you, Colleen!
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You’re welcome. ❤
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Wow, what an experience to read this poem from beginning to end. The ending is very thought-provoking as well, and I also like the repetition in this piece. Well done!
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Thank you, Lucy!
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I say our choices make our life. Thanks for sharing.
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Thank you, Grace!
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You’ve incarnated a philosophy and experience of life in this exquisite sequence! Brava!
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Thank you, Frank!
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Very great sequence Reena. We do live on the edge all the time. No promise for a secure tomorrow. Live one day at a time!
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Thank you, Dwight!
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Very nice. Loved it.
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Thank you so much!
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This is just absolutely beautiful. But that last line. So true. But we are not prepared for it. I love this Reena.
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Thank you so much, Lorraine!
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There is the reality of it all in that end verse
Much✏love
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Thank you, Gillena!
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