We open the house after a couple of years.
Spider-webs, furniture covered with old sheets and a skeletal kitchen greet us. My thoughts go back to the days, when the house reverberated with sounds – cackling laughter of children, my mother-in-law’s tyrannical instructions to all for doing things in a certain way and the cribbing of servants in corners.
I open the kitchen window, and sunlight shines on some cups near the sink. I wonder who had visited the place last and used those cups.
An era has ended, but associated emotions are welling up. I’d never liked the place before.
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Thank you, Shivi!
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All about the history here Reena. I often wonder about the stories of old houses. Good story!
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Nobody is really interested in the history, beyond a certain point. But I wonder what we mean by haunted houses. Maybe, the emotions generated reverberate, not ghosts.
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I actually love the history of old houses. You’re right Reena, I think it has more to do with the energy of emotions than actual ghosts (as we call them). Every house has a story for sure.
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A very well written and atmospheric story. My mind kept thinking of partition – no idea why?
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Stories take us all to different places. Thank you, James!
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Beautifully written.
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Thank you so much!
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Very intriguing piece!!
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Thank you, Aahana!
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Good memories or bad, I hope she can reconnect with the place. Nice story!
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Thank you, Brenda!
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I love the imagery.
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Thank you so much!
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Did I understand the end correctly in thinking maybe there will be a chance to like the place once the dust is swept away? Good story, Reena.
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Now you are referring to layers of truth’ 😊
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🙂
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I like how memories surge in this story. Will they sell the house or create memories of their own?
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I like how you raise questions about the way forward. Thanks, Gabriella!
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Things and places are filled with memories. This is poignant.
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Thank you, Paula!
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Nicely atmospheric, Reena.
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Thank you, Susan!
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I enjoyed it. An interesting take, well done.
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Thank you, Bill!
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Glad when positive memories shine.
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There are layers to every story and memory.
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Nice piece of nostalgia!
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Yes. Thanks!
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Poignant, and understated.
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Thank you, Sandra!
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Whilst perfectly formed as a 100 word story this feels like it could really go somewhere!
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It comes from many places, and sure has the potential to go somewhere.
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A family history that is better left locked away perhaps.
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Yes. Thanks, Iain!
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I really liked the change of feelings about the house
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Thank you, Neil!
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