endless excellence -calls for condemnation makes abysmal performance, look like aberration it's elite snobbery, projects insensitivity to the average, to mediocre minds makes abysmal performance, look like aberration despisable arrogance fails to connect to the average, to mediocre minds it has no right to exist in society despisable arrogance fails to connect pliable masses, wants them to think it has no right to exist in society no right to spoil power equations pliable masses, wants them to think endless excellence -calls for condemnation no right to spoil power equations elite snobbery, projects insensitivity
Weekend Writing Prompt #145 – Abysmal
snobs
and them
what ya call
it
classed
as thinga me bobs!
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A brilliant poem.
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Thank you, Sadje!
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You’re welcome 😉
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Marvellously penned
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Thank you so much!
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Wow! Is this a pantoum? An extremely difficult form if so. And even if it’s not, you created something masterful here Reena.
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It is – with the manipulation of one word to stay within the word limit. Thanks for the appreciation, Violet!
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