I stop in my tracks
on hearing sounds from beneath
“We can’t go further
Goodbye, mate”… and I wonder
how many more steps for me?
Fallen leaves (ochiba)
I stop in my tracks
on hearing sounds from beneath
“We can’t go further
Goodbye, mate”… and I wonder
how many more steps for me?
Reena Saxena 
Reblogged this on Frank J. Tassone and commented:
#Haiku Happenings #1 (11/20/19(: Reena Saxena’s latest #tanka for my current #Haikai challenge!
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rake one section
time
take make
some hay
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I really enjoyed this one. 🙂
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ty. what instrument do you play?
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Wow! Excellent take. So different.
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Thanks, Indira!
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So poignant, Reena.
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Thank you, Lisa!
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You’re welcome.
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