Unfrozen

On November 5, 2019November 5, 2019 By Reena SaxenaIn Micropoetry

 frozen memories
 thawing in heat of your love
 then coming across
 faces behind the fair mask
 trust hits indelible rocks

 pain oozes out of
 crevices in subconscious
 flowing over thoughts
 How do I convince my soul
 it will not be hurt again

 permanence of scars
 spreads dark ink on fluttering
 pages of the soul
 I always meet antigods
 in the guise of erasers

Colleen’s 2019 Weekly #Tanka Tuesday #Poetry Challenge No. 152, #Poet’sChoice

11 thoughts on “Unfrozen”

Colleen M. Chesebro

Reena, I like this Tanka trio. Each stanza progresses well into the next. Good stuff! ❤

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November 10, 2019 at 1:44 pm Reply
1. Reena Saxena
  
  Thank you, Colleen!
  
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  November 10, 2019 at 10:18 pm Reply
  1. Colleen M. Chesebro
    
    Welcome! ❤️
    
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    November 10, 2019 at 10:24 pm Reply
tracikenworth

Reblogged this on Where Genres Collide Traci Kenworth YA Author & Book Blogger.

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November 6, 2019 at 3:44 pm Reply
1. Reena Saxena
  
  Thanks so much!
  
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  November 7, 2019 at 12:53 am Reply
utahan15

please to pain
loss to gain
that which
is doth remain!

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November 5, 2019 at 11:39 am Reply
1. Reena Saxena
  
  Thanks!
  
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  November 5, 2019 at 1:19 pm Reply
  1. utahan15
    
    yw, keep up with such excellence!>
    
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    November 6, 2019 at 6:57 am Reply
V.J. Knutson

Powerful!

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November 5, 2019 at 8:36 am Reply
1. Reena Saxena
  
  Thanks a lot!
  
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  November 5, 2019 at 8:38 am Reply
  1. V.J. Knutson
    
    Wellome
    
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    November 5, 2019 at 8:39 am Reply

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