voices
tell me what to do
voices
I don’t like
voices
try to break my silence
provoke me
into taking a stand
shadows
lurk in the background
shadows
overpower my presence
shadows
suppress my light
shadows
not mine – but
the source of voices
Insanity?
Within Inside
or Outside
Shadows
Lost
Are Not
Voices to
Be Ignored
Otherwise on
the Outside or
Inside They come to rule
Without Shadows there
is only
Sun
And
No Us..:)
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That is a powerful viewpoint! Thank you, Katie!
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Smiles.. thanks for
The inspiration of
Your Poetry..:)
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Insanity? Maybe… or perhaps it is just the way things work. We learned how to speak by the repetition of voices we can no longer remember. We have learned so many norms and behaviors from the structure around and within us that is, nevertheless, not truly ourself… maybe the whole world is insane, and it is only a matter of the most prominent norms gets the stamp of sanity. You have left your mark on me today.
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Thank you, Lona! Sanity is just a social norm. Otherwise, sanity and insanity are nth different states of existence.
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The GAF – global assessment of function, and levels of internal dysphoria may be measures that can differentiate beyond the parameters of social norms,but GAF is itself steeped in social normative, but there are so many states of being labeled as insane that really are merely different. The voices are always there.
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nice allusion to the influence of the intangible
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Thank you, Larry!
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Sometimes reality itself is very close to insanity… those voices always telling are for real
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I agree. Thanks, Bjorn!
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The use of repetition here throughout is so powerful.
This especially, tucked near the center of the first stanza:
“voices
I don’t like
voices”
…gave me a shiver.
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Thank you so much! It has an eerie feel about it.
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Enjoyed the interesting perspective of this Reena, power of shadows, and thanks for sharing your voice. Well written!
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Thank you so much, Rob!
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Reblogged this on BrewNSpew and commented:
Sharing Reena’s response to the prompt –
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Thanks!
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😉
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Superb! Your last line makes a bold statement and very relevant to mankind and the current brouhaha. Thank you for participating in the challenge.
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Thanks 🙂
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😉
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Wonderful poem Reena… This reminds me of the quote, What’s happening is not what’s going on!
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That’s a fab Quote! Thanks for sharing!
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Thank you … It is not mine, but you can use it if you like.
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I’m tempted for sure 🙂
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Excellent!
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Thanks!
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