I watch the fury of rain
lashing against my window
asking to be let in
the environs of
my insulated life
I feel the silence
of the tempest
in the mind
tearing me apart
the same night …
I walk out
and soak myself
feeling the unison
of the inside
and outside
‘ feeling the unison
of the inside
and outside’ Beautiful. Enjoying Mumbai rains?
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Yes. It is good to enjoy from the balcony. Step out in the slush and ….😀
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When I was in Mumbai at my son’r place at Marine Drive it was fun indeed. Now he has shifted to Powai.
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Powai traffic jams are notorious. I’ve worked in Andheri (East) for 3 years.
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So true.
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Mumbai rains! Love how you compared the turmoil within with the rain lashing outside.
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Thank you, Punam!
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You are welcome, Reena.
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This is very powerful Reena expressing the effects within and without! Well done! ❤
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Thank you so much, Deborah!
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Reblogged this on BrewNSpew.
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Reena, this is awesome! I love your last verse and how it finishes the piece with a thought-provoking ending. Thank you for joining the challenge!
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Thanks a lot!
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