Inspiring prose
“Darkness came, full of moths and beetles. I was oppressed by the velvety emptiness of the word and swathes of soft grass. Then the fumes of the night put me to sleep” (As I walked out one Midsummer morning)
Poem
claustrophobic darkness
not-s0-romantic a night
prickly, sick dreams
make me long for light
I wonder what a poet sees
in decaying slices of the moon
thick, dark, smoky layers
stars pushed in cloud cocoons
a lonely heart somewhere
croons a melancholy song
I drift from exhaustion to sleep
it will be dawn before long…
Yes Reena! This is a great quatrain, and a super nod to Lee. Loved this little gem…
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Thank you so much, Rob!
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The mood of your poem is morbid and you describe it so well here, Reena.
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Thanks, Jade!
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You are very welcome, Reena.
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Not a good night of sleep but well-written interpretation of Laurie’s quote!
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Thank you, Lynn!
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So affective, such emotion.
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Thank you so much!
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My pleasure Reena
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State of mind decides what you see in the moon. Beautiful poem.
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Thank you, Indira!
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A dark interpretation of Lee’s night darkness – I especially liked “stars pushed in cloud cocoons”. Thanks for joining with the prompt Reena
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Thanks for the inspiring prompt, Laura!
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