Foggy paths

“Are you afraid?”, asked Clare. The touch of his quivering hand said that he was.

“No, I’m not. I know you are there with me.”

It was a long drive ahead, the paths were foggy and internet connectivity poor.  But together, they hoped they would make it to the destination.


20 thoughts on “Foggy paths

  1. This is great because it left me thinking- as with all microfiction you left aspects open ended to cause the reader to think about what is happening. Cheers, I can never seem to get that right.

    That said-

    What does internet connectivity have to do with the rest of the story- are they afraid because they have no internet? Is that a reference to a spotty GPS system?

    Keep writing, my friend!

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