Foggy paths

“Are you afraid?”, asked Clare. The touch of his quivering hand said that he was.

“No, I’m not. I know you are there with me.”

It was a long drive ahead, the paths were foggy and internet connectivity poor.  But together, they hoped they would make it to the destination.


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20 thoughts on “Foggy paths

  1. This is great because it left me thinking- as with all microfiction you left aspects open ended to cause the reader to think about what is happening. Cheers, I can never seem to get that right.

    That said-

    What does internet connectivity have to do with the rest of the story- are they afraid because they have no internet? Is that a reference to a spotty GPS system?

    Keep writing, my friend!

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