life passed me by
on stallions, while I
skated on thin ice
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deceptive mirrors
built to swallow, not reflect
Usurai* for you
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*Usurai - Japanese word for thin ice
Usurai

I love the image of life passing by on stallions!
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It is related to speed. Thank you so much!
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Reblogged this on Frank J. Tassone and commented:
#Haiku Happenings #3: Reena’s latest haiku for my current #haikai challenge!
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I have heard of children who were deceived by deceptive mirrors and fell through! Well done.
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Thank you, Dwight!
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Wow – this one was gorgeous! So fragile, delicate, and lovely.
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Thank you so much!
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