I move memories
to a different wall
where the light is dim
and the colors will fade
without staining my soul
I hang utility
handy tools
to keep me busy
while I create new stuff
to displace the old
I nail Time
but it smiles back
controls my existence
from its enclosure
mocking my freedom
I stare at the clothes
on wire hangers
and remember how good
I looked in those
during my lifetime
I love the flow of your poem. Nailing time and having it laugh at you was quite good! A poem of reminiscence for sure!
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Thank you, Dwight!
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Lovely. itne khoobsurat vichar kahan se aate hain.
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Dimaag to ek hi hai 😊😊
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par eksa nahi beta.
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Oh Reena…..that first stanza is amazing! So glad you posted to the prompt….moving memories as we redecorate, take down the old, put up the new….and those clothes! Well done.
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Thank you so much, Lillian!
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I like the structure of this poem, Reena, with a different action at the beginning of each stanza followed by a reflection on the action. I like the idea of moving memories to prevent them fading and nailing time (with little success). The final stanza is pensive – it’s also very familiar. 🙂
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Thank you so much, Kim!
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Oh boy, do I ever relate to your closing lines Reena… do I ever! You stirred memories eith your poem.
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Thank you, Rob! Glad you liked it!
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I nail time… I like that
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Thanks! We do hang clocks on the wall.
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Nice lines: “and the colors will fade
without staining my soul”
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Thank you so much, Frank!
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This is not a sonnet… you probably want to link it to the other Mr Linky
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Yes. There were two links showing on the screen, and I linked it to the wrong one. Then, I linked it to Poetics on realization.
How do I remove it?
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Lovely
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Thanks!
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