Temptations

Posted on April 24, 2018 by Reena Saxena

flames of desire

change contours of molten wax

tell-tales of passion

submerged identities with

beguiling temptations

Colleen’s Weekly #Tanka Tuesday #Poetry Challenge No. 81

8 thoughts on “Temptations”

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Aweni says:

April 27, 2018 at 10:06 am

Nice piece.

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1. Reena Saxena says:
  
  April 27, 2018 at 1:56 pm
  
  Thanks!
  
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Colleen Chesebro says:

April 24, 2018 at 2:50 pm

Reena, this is a passionate Tanka. I love this line: “…change contours of molten wax.” It shows how malleable we are as humans. ❤

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1. Reena Saxena says:
  
  April 24, 2018 at 5:05 pm
  
  Thanks! Actually, the words lead to ideas. Passionate is not my usual style.
  
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  1. Colleen Chesebro says:
    
    April 24, 2018 at 6:21 pm
    
    And that’s a wonderful way to try new venues. Well done! ❤
    
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