A set of two BUSSOKUSEKIKA [575777 syllables], or a Quadrille (44 words) as you like it.
forgotten pages
dropped on a life’s journey
fluttering in the wind
will come back to haunt some day
framed in the consequences
of belief, thoughtless actions
fluctuating shapes
characters in the drama
laughing at wisdom
experience murmurs in
sunset years of life
real hallucinations
Reena Saxena 
The visual you have chosen here is perfect, and your words create just the right tone for regret.
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Thanks!
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love the contradictions of real hallucinations.
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Thanks a lot!
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I like the description of how experience murmurs later in one’s life.
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There is nothing else at that stahe, other than memories and experience.
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there is the sound of karma fluttering through your words
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Yeah… it rings through life. I came across a theory which says that Karma is not only in your actions, but thoughts as well. Negative energy will bounce back.
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Hmmm..real hallucinations…I like the forgotten pages dropped on life’s journey.
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Thank you 🙂
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