This is an Erasure Poem (created by erasing some words from an article or poem). It is also called WhiteOut Poetry by some.
The source article is one written by me on LinkedIn.
POEM
weave the bits and pieces
comprehend the theme
rays of sunlight
scattering
do not change
wavelength or intensity
one thought leading to another
a sequential process
channelization
reshaping
journey of thought
from percept to concept.
A framework
A context
awareness
Chaos and order
will always be
interchanging situations
An interesting form … well done!
Dwight
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Thank you, Dwight!
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The essence of attention span boiled down to what we can grasp… like sieving order from chaos.
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I agree with this interpretation. Thanks for adding value.
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I like the interplay of chaos and order.
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Thanks!
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Erasure poems can be chaotic but this connects with me!
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Thank you, Lynn!
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I enjoy reading and writing erasure poems, Reena, and you’ve given me a nudge to try one again.
I really like the lines:
‘rays of sunlight
scattering
do not change
wavelength or intensity’.
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Thank you so much! I love the concealed beauty of words that emerges on restructuring.
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