Here is a set of tilus (poem meter 6.3.1 syllables)
Doing all that I could
I give up
now
I have reached the bridge
which I must
cross
I look forward to
the finale
Death
but my dues from life
are unpaid
Yet
Bridges to Cross
Here is a set of tilus (poem meter 6.3.1 syllables)
Doing all that I could
I give up
now
I have reached the bridge
which I must
cross
I look forward to
the finale
Death
but my dues from life
are unpaid
Yet
Reena Saxena 
I just read that three separate times and had three separate reactions to it. At first it was heavy and felt a little dark. But then the more I read it, the more it seemed like an exhale of acceptance after a long journey.
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Thanks for putting in that effort to understand, Jami!
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You used one of my favourite forms, and included a bridge image (as did I) but I was doubling.
Well done. I have never tried to link the tilus as skillfully as you did.
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Thank you. Linkages just happen, if one is trying to make a point.
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Wow! Thanks for the powerful entry to today’s challenge. The accounting of those dues is a consuming thought, at times. Very nice!
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Thsnk you, Dan!
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