Sleep eludes me on
balmy, moonlit nights, when
the soul is hypnotized
by greed and desire, and
the beast awakens within.
Inspired by Elsie Hagley at
Weekly Tanka Prompt Challenge #Week 56
Pic: renegadetribune.com
The Awakening
Sleep eludes me on
balmy, moonlit nights, when
the soul is hypnotized
by greed and desire, and
the beast awakens within.
Inspired by Elsie Hagley at
Weekly Tanka Prompt Challenge #Week 56
Pic: renegadetribune.com
Reena Saxena 
Hypnotised
Mesmerised too
Those piercing eyes
Your tanka tells the
Truth
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Thanks 🙂
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My pleasure 🙂
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Thanks, those eyes, staring straight at me, perfect also your tanka poem.
Happy days writing.
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Thank you so much!
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