It is an exhilarating feeling.
The vagabond lingers on, lazily on the terrace, under the false impression that the clouds are trying to touch him. He looks at the tiny people and buildings down below, and feels like God. ‘Every dog has his day’ is not just a phrase.
Then, the doubts started creeping up, to that altitude. Is he in a position of advantage, or just disconnected from the world? The top is a lonely place, and probably the world below has not noticed his existence. What should he do to attract attention?
Suddenly, he is distracted by the fumes of smoke arising from a factory …. It is probably Sector 49. It is the only factory in that place, with high chimneys.
He pulls out his phone to inform the fire brigade, and rushes down to inform people about taking an alternate route.
Seeing from a vantage point does help.
(152 words)
Inspired by Priceless Joy at
Flash Fiction for Aspiring Writers Challenge
Pic: Grant Sud
This vagabond has a thinking mind. but he saved the factory and the workers from a catastrophe.
a nice story with a good ending,Reena.
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Vagabonds are street smart by their upbringing. Thanks!
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Great story Reena! So glad that he became a hero at the end and didn’t try to jump!
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Why does everybody on the edge of a terrace have to jump? 🙂
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That’s very true!
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Funny how the prompt inspires tales of either suicide or heroism. The figure in the foreground is powerful.
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Yes. I read quite a few suicide tales.
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Interesting take on the prompt, I like it! The “vagabond” could be useful then.. great subversion of stereotypes!
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Thanks!
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Lucky he was there to spot it. Nice take.
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Thanks!
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The initial paragraphs nicely described.
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I like the contrast between being in control and being isolated. A great read.
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Thanks a lot!
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