This is a poem jointly written with my friend Sara Jacobovici, which just happened. She sent me a few lines of her poem, and I completed it with the flow of my thoughts. We are happy with the result.
Sara Jacobovici writes
Giving birth to a moment, in the blink of an eye.
Connecting with a lifetime, through a sideways smile.
I see its transparency awash with the tide.
As the moon pulls time in, and lets go with a sigh.
Reena continues
Ethereal is the love, and fragile the connect
letting in the Sun, as it covers the last mile
The curtain of daylight, and brightness that blinds
The journey of the moon, is an untold story divine.
They guard life, while time moves
They measure time, while life moves
They meet in twilight, like a moth kisses the flame
What spurs them on to continue the endless game?
A parallel existence, getting less than it deserves
phasing out oneself to let the other, reign and shine.
The mystery of intertwined destinies pulls them in
to discover their own self, and secrets of love sublime.
Beautiful collaboration of poem by great writers .I love the flow of words in the poem😍
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Thank you so much!
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Hey Reena,
I phased out half-way through this delightful poem only to find myself woken by the tender sweet kiss of radiant sunlight. Thank you for illumination.
Your ask in your poem…What spurs them on to continue the endless game? Could it be, the persistent thrill of the chase?
Also, would you mind if I asked what a ‘Content Developer’ is, or what they do? You describe yourself as, ‘Writer, Published Poet, Image and Success Coach, Trainer and Content Developer.’ and I am curious to understand a little more. Thank you.
Namaste 🙂
DN
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Thanks for tbe interest. I develop content for training programs, both live and online.
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You are welcome. Thanks for the reply.
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I love these lines:
“Ethereal is the love, and fragile the connect”
“A parallel existence, getting less than it deserves”
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Thanks!
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Great collaboration, two heads are better than one
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Thanks!
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Stunning! Poets like sun & moon in sync 🙂
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Thank you so much 😀
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I like this, especially how you collaborated with another poet. That’s a cool idea.
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Thanks. It was not plamned. Just happened.
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Reblogged this on BrewNSpew and commented:
A lovely collaboration between two superb writers, Reena Saxena and Sara Jacobovici
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Absolutely beautiful. I am reblogging which it will also be shared on Twitter.
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Thank you so much!
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Love the collaborative nature of this poem. 🙂
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Thanks!
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I love a good collaboration between poets.. it’s been a while, but I used to do it a lot.
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It needs a sync.
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